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A Message To God

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Warm shelter in the hole at the end,
save me from the thunder of men.
I kiss the barrel to settle again.

My virtue left to make amends,
held down by right in words of pen.
Warm shelter in the hole at the end.

Soon a spread of black and red blend,
thus shall spill my lone, precious ken.
I kiss the barrel to settle again.

I lie in daylight alone with no friend,
locked in the cold dome of my own den.
Warm shelter in the hole at the end.

Life on one side with nothing to defend,
With god, it shivers in fright, amen.
I kiss the barrel to settle again.

Prepare the stamp and a letter to send.
The time has come to feel again.
Warm shelter in the hole at the end;
I kiss the barrel to settle again.
I was given an assignment in my Creative Writing class and it was my first assignment since I joined. We were told to write a type of poetry called "Villanelle". This is what I came up with, and I feel like it must be one of my strongest pieces ever. I wanna know what you guys think it is about because what I've heard from my classmates have all been wrong from what I intended.
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